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  Long Blue Monday

  Erhard von Büren

  Copyright © 2018 Erhard von Büren

  Translated by Helen Wallimann

  Original title: Ein langer blauer Montag. verlag die brotsuppe, Biel/Bienne 2013

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  Contents

  I That Summer – Prologue

  II Claudia – Shadow Play

  1 Revox – Bird Songs

  2 Bede – Rehearsals in Lee Forest

  3 The House on the Aare River

  4 Indian Summer

  5 Wasp Flight

  III The Ganters by the Stream – Village Theatricals

  1 Potato Economy

  2 ‘Move, you must keep moving …’

  3 Union Representative

  4 ‘High Noon at Midnight’

  5 ‘Why ever didn’t I become a bricklayer!’

  IV The Carrels on the Aare – Premieres

  1 Overtaking Manoeuvres

  2 ‘Gaudeamus igitur’

  V That Summer – Trilogy

  1 Breaktime Walks

  2 A Little Theory

  VI Shame and Pride

  1 ‘Hey, you there!’

  2 ‘Oh to get away! To some place else!’

  3 ‘Catch me if you can!’

  4 Model Pupil

  VII Great Expectations

  1 ‘Mr Smith is a Man’

  2 Pea Soup and Bacon

  3 ‘Requiem for a Nun’

  VIII Almost a Love Story

  1 What next?

  2 The Crooked Tower Bastion

  3 Glühwein helps

  4 A Bungled Exit

  IX That Summer – Going Through with it

  1 ‘The beginning of what?’

  2 ‘The moon over the allotments’

  3 ‘You can’t lose what you never possessed …’

  4 ‘Your hair is like the wheatfield on the hill …’

  5 ‘Out with it!’

  6 ‘When we meet again in ten years time …’

  X Successors

  1 Maria, Madeleine, Verena, Veronica

  2 An Attack or an Affair?

  3 Chaos

  4 Relapse

  XI That Summer – Epilogue

  The Author

  The Translator

  I

  That Summer – Prologue

  ‘For days sometimes he did nothing but lie half asleep in the shade of a bush on the river bank.’

  Sherwood Anderson, Poor White

  Three or four times a day, I’d walk along Haselweg as far as the reservoir, a grass-covered mound up near the crossing; I’d turn left down the steep field path to the wood, then skirt the wood as far as the corner above Langendorf; from there I’d take the dirt track between two fields to reach the road that goes up the slope and across to Sagacker Heights.

  I remember the heat in June – it was in the June heat that those daily walks began. I remember the July heat, the heat even early in the morning. I remember the peal of bells down from Oberdorf parish church, the eleven o’clock chimes up from the town – Langendorf didn’t have a church of its own yet, the chimes, many-voiced and distant, came up from the town.

  It was in the summer of nineteen fifty-nine, my third year at the teacher training college.

  I remember striding along the edge of the wood, along the edge of the wheatfields, outwardly calm, full of turmoil inside. A jumble of words and sentences ran wildly through my head, snatches of conversation, things I’d overheard, things I’d invented: What does someone like Claudia say to someone like Bede? What does she say to someone like me? What did she say? What might she have said? What shall I make her say? Beginnings of conversations, fragments of dialogue in varying settings.

  A play had to be written. Already in May I’d spent every free afternoon and every evening writing plots. For weeks, college had been no more than a distraction.

  In the second week of June I decided to stay at home. If I continued to go to school I’d never finish the play. The play had to be written. Somehow or other I had to get out of this whole affair.

  The solution had come to me in an allotment up on the Zurichberg. On Ascension Thursday I’d hitched a lift to Zurich and seen Thornton Wilder’s The Skin of Our Teeth at the Schauspielhaus. After the performance I looked for a spot to spend the night.

  In an allotment at the top end of Hadlaubsteig I found a roofed porch with a bench. I found the porch and the bench, but I didn’t find sleep. I felt cold, and as I gazed, freezing, across the moonlight-drenched bushes and vegetable patches, the hut roofs and the water butts, I suddenly knew what I had to do.

  Dawn had not yet broken when I left the garden and went down to the town. There was only one thing to be done, but it was a big thing and I had to get started.

  Bahnhofplatz, Bellevueplatz, there and back and there again, through the Niederdorf district, or along Bahnhofstrasse. At the Sankt Annahof store I bought a stiff-covered exercise book and started to write down all the things that had to be included in the play.

  Even finding the right title was no easy matter. I kept thinking of all those superb American titles: Cat on a Hot Tin Roof, The Crucible, A Streetcar Named Desire. I couldn’t think of anything that was even half as meaningful and at the same time so enthrallingly vivid. All the impediments and frustrations in my life had to go into the title, but also defiance, pride, hope and passion – everything had to be in it.

  That Friday in Zurich something else dawned on me: writing just one play for Claudia wouldn’t do. It had to be three plays, something on the scale of the trilogy Mourning Becomes Electra at the very least. And they would all put in an appearance, albeit with other names: down in the town, Claudia and Elizabeth and Bede and Corinne and Conrad and Jacob, the whole gang; and up in the village, the Ganters in their house by the stream: my father, my mother, my younger sister, my elder sister. I’d put them all in it, I still didn’t know how, but I’d have to find a way soon.

  In the evening I went to the cinema. I spent the rest of that Friday night on a bench by the lake.

  The model pupil playing truant for two days – it was a premiere. No, it was only the dress rehearsal for the big truancy that lay ahead.

  The summer of fifty-nine, three weeks in June and two weeks in July and then the whole of the holidays.

  Even when I wasn’t sitting in front of my typewriter I kept at it. If I went outside the h
ouse or down to the stream I took my exercise book and pencil with me.

  I still see the pencilled writing, the long loops and tails, I see the haste in which it was written – in the kitchen, in front of the house, on the bench beside the old chicken hut down by the stream. Not a moment to be lost, not a single idea should be lost, the trilogy had to be written, I had to come to an end, the thing had to be brought to an end.

  I often worked on the landing. I placed the small table against the staircase balustrade, up in the front near the window. When I looked up from my typewriter I saw the ash trees over by the stream. With the window open I could hear the regular murmur of the stream, the rising, falling murmur of the ash trees. I saw the wind blowing through the tangled leaves: the branches bent, sprang back, bent again, the leaves glistened whitish, ruffled and tossed around by the gusts.

  Out on the landing by the window was my favourite place. In the afternoon no one ever disturbed me. In the afternoon, my mother was away too. That summer, she was working part time in a shirt factory in Langendorf.

  I might have guessed that the three ringbinders, the two folders and the stiff-covered exercise books would still be lying around somewhere. On leaving home, in the autumn of that year, I’d left everything behind.

  I hadn’t burned the exercise books and the files. In my view that would have been just too theatrical. I’d simply left them where they were, in a box up in the attic, together with a couple of other boxes full of old books. I seldom threw anything away, but I also hardly ever deliberately and carefully stored anything.

  So I must always have known that those things would still be lying around somewhere. And I could also always have said more or less what was filed away in those folders and ringbinders: the drafts, the fair copy. I’d probably also have been able to name the titles of the different parts: ‘On the Wall’, ‘Chaconne’, ‘Blue Monday’. And hadn’t I, toward the end of the holidays, named the whole thing ‘A Long Blue Monday’? Inspired by Eugene O’Neill’s Long Day’s Journey into Night? Finally I’d had to hurry: Before the end of the holidays, and before school started again – started for me too, after all that truancy – I’d wanted to go to Zurich once more, freed of the burden, freed of constraints. As a reward for having freed myself of the constraints and the burden.

  A long blue Monday, yes that’s probably what it had been.

  And here’s something else I could have recalled at any time these past forty years – if I’d really wanted to:

  The hero is sitting on the Carrels’ garden wall by the river Aare. That is, he’s sitting at the very front of the stage, his legs dangling over the apron, the way you might dangle your legs over a wall, and he talks and talks, without looking at the audience, his gaze directed over their heads to the Carrels’ house. Back there – in the dim light between the ceiling and the heads of the audience – there’s nothing to be seen, unfortunately, except for a couple of brightly lit windows: there’s no Claudia there, ready to come out onto the balcony and lean over the railing, all ears for what the young man down on the wall has to say.

  Behind him on the stage, however, domestic battle scenes are being enacted, plenty to be seen there: the family show, the payday pub-crawl, naturalistic dialogues in the house by the stream till long past midnight, the same as ever, being shown now, while the son of this same family, seated here on the wall, addresses his soliloquies to the auditorium, over the heads of the audience, his eyes on the imaginary windows of the Carrel villa. Behind him on the proscenium stage, the burden of the past; in front of him, up in the air, the dream of a splendid future; and in between, from the stage apron to the audience, the soliloquies of the anti-hero. The house by the stream and the house on the Aare and the wall in between.

  I simply fitted in everything I’d ever seen at the municipal theatre and at the four cinemas of the town when screen adaptations of plays by Tennessee Williams and Eugene O’Neill were shown. I tried to fit in everything I’d ever read in the paperback editions of modern plays about stage settings and stage directions: ‘viewing from the walls’, slide projections, memory sequences and dream scenes behind gauze curtains; along with a stage manager, and an author who is on stage from time to time and starts arguments with the stage manager, people in the audience who start acting, and actors who go and sit down in the audience. I used every means available to air my personal drama, and to do so to the greatest effect.

  Filed away in three ring binders: that much I always knew. Enough, at all events, to deter me from ever wanting to take another look. It wouldn’t have bothered me in the least if the files had landed in the waste paper collection or in the dustbin.

  In all those years I’d never ever given a thought to what exactly I’d written at the time. But the fact that I’d written something, the circumstances in which I’d done so, how I’d gone about it: that’s what I remembered.

  A model pupil gone astray. But why oh why was I secretly pleased about it?

  ‘Student digs for a retired English teacher,’ says Anna. ‘Not bad at all, I almost envy you. Internet connection, even a kitchen. And everything so beautifully tidy, and the bookshelves still almost empty. Actually, that’s something that does rather surprise me.’

  The way grown-up daughters make fun of their fathers. But isn’t it nice of her to have come by?

  She’s been working in a hospital in Biel since February, and when she goes to Zurich to see her boyfriend she occasionally stops off here. Her third job as a house officer. Or is it the fourth? There’s no need to worry about Anna. Competent like Erica, her mother.

  ‘So you think you’ll get on faster with your Anderson here,’ says Anna.

  ‘I hope so,’ I say.

  ‘But that can’t be the only reason why you moved out of Winznau!’

  ‘What other reasons might there have been?’

  ‘Erica? Doesn’t she have anything to do with it?’

  ‘Well, she doesn’t have any objections. On the contrary. She thinks it’s really useful for her to have a pied-à-terre here. Of course, if the pied-à-terre was in Paris or London or Edinburgh she’d get more out of it. But Solothurn’s not bad either.’

  Anna laughs.

  ‘The flat was offered to me, I wasn’t specially looking for anything. I don’t know how long I can stay. Perhaps up until the autumn. It’s only temporary.’

  It’s all been for nothing, all in vain, a life wasted. How lightly that now passes through my mind! It’s as though it had nothing to do with me. It doesn’t make me feel depressed, it doesn’t bother me.

  It’s contrary to all psychiatric experience, this feeling of elation early in the morning. A mood if not depressed, at least subdued. Listlessness. Nothing gets done in the morning, in the morning everything seems difficult.

  But I myself feel light in the morning, lighter than at any other time of day. I awake easily from a light sleep, I drink weak coffee, I don’t worry about anything, I don’t worry about my new ailments, I don’t worry about past annoyances. I sit in the kitchen, watch the day break, see the pale light in the sky grow brighter and brighter. I see the sickle moon above the roof ridge of the house next door, hear the crescendo of the traffic in the distance. I feel light, I am light. Not that I feel exactly full of drive, but I don’t feel tired either. This early-morning euphoria, Anna assured me, goes against all received psychiatric opinion.

  Is it a consequence of that long-forgotten time when I was still a model pupil and willed myself to get up before six every morning? Of course I didn’t always manage, despite all my efforts. The good habit was rather weak.

  These days I don’t have to make an effort, it’s more or less automatic. And at the kitchen table, my mind comes up with half sentences like: all for nothing, all in vain, nothing I wanted to do accomplished – which seems to me to be true for the day before, for the week before, indeed for ever.

  It was as if, in the sti
llness of the morning, I took real pleasure in listing all the things that hadn’t worked out for me. Defeat upon defeat and, in the other column, a couple of narrow victories, wins on points. A model schoolboy only ever wins on points. If indeed there’s anything like victory and defeat. In the end it probably comes to the same thing, in the end it comes to a draw.

  And the Chinese man in the ‘Song of the Earth’ comes to mind. Or did I find the story somewhere else? The old man who retires to the foot of a mountain. Without bitterness, he leaves human society. It’s summer, the nights are hot. Towards morning a shower of rain refreshes him. A fine mist lies in the ravine. The sun rises. A blackbird calls out into the stillness.

  Whatever my thoughts, I enjoy the morning, I enjoy the lightness within me, the lightness around me.

  Or am I only glad that I don’t have to pack my briefcase anymore?

  I really must have started to hate it! Getting up effortlessly in the morning had long become a thing of the past. I was often in a bad mood, especially in the early morning. I saw the day ahead, the classes of young people in front of me. Youth has something invigorating, oh yes, definitely – but classrooms full, a whole building full!

  I was right to stop. It wasn’t high time, not quite that, it was time, that’s all.

  II

  Claudia – Shadow Play

  ‘There also I meet myself and recall myself – what, when, or where I did a thing, and how I felt when I did it.’

  Aurelius Augustinus, Confessions

  1

  Revox – Bird Songs

  Choruses of birdsong. Claudia’s father had recorded them with his tape recorder, in the garden, every Saturday morning from March to September. Now it was on, from the left spool over the recording head to the right spool, smaller and smaller but faster and faster on the left, slowing but growing on the right, and the loudspeaker recreated the summer, the garden, with twitterings and chirrupings, with warbling and tweeting. The tape recorder, the rotation, slowing down here, speeding up there, mesmerising.